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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-04-07 02:50 PM


Now that your gone, I know what i miss,
Your loving ways, devoted to our bliss.

Hurt your heart, so much I could not see,
just what all happen between you and me.

Can not take back all the old history,
Though moving forward is not as easy as can be.

Wishing I/we could make all this go away,
So that we both could be home to stay.

No feeling you say you have for me,
I feel in my heart, though I still have the key.

Even if I could unlock it for a short time,
One thing i know, I'd never cross the line.

© Copyright 2003 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-07 03:24 PM


BSlicker~
Really sad thoughts~
Sincerely expressed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2003-04-07 03:34 PM


agree with Marge

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3 posted 2003-04-07 04:05 PM


sad piece
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4 posted 2003-04-07 04:21 PM


maybe Brad
thanks for reading
just hoping the right person that reads this gets the message... but then again maybe not.

Bernie





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Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (04-08-2003 12:45 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-04-07 04:41 PM


Well said...such longing..here's hoping!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
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6 posted 2003-04-07 04:57 PM


I understand where you are coming from in this, but sometimes it's hard not to cross the line when you don't know where the line is. Good poem!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2003-04-07 05:11 PM


Enchantress and Kethry
Yes hoping and I do know where the line is now.  But i think it's to late.  Who knows.

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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8 posted 2003-04-07 05:36 PM


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