Open Poetry #25 |
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Crossing Line |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind ![]() |
Now that your gone, I know what i miss, Your loving ways, devoted to our bliss. Hurt your heart, so much I could not see, just what all happen between you and me. Can not take back all the old history, Though moving forward is not as easy as can be. Wishing I/we could make all this go away, So that we both could be home to stay. No feeling you say you have for me, I feel in my heart, though I still have the key. Even if I could unlock it for a short time, One thing i know, I'd never cross the line. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSlicker~ Really sad thoughts~ Sincerely expressed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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one_thought Junior Member
since 2003-04-03
Posts 23just a state of mind |
agree with Marge [This message has been edited by one_thought (04-07-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
sad piece |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
maybe Brad thanks for reading just hoping the right person that reads this gets the message... but then again maybe not. Bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (04-08-2003 12:45 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said...such longing..here's hoping! ![]() ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I understand where you are coming from in this, but sometimes it's hard not to cross the line when you don't know where the line is. Good poem! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Enchantress and Kethry Yes hoping and I do know where the line is now. But i think it's to late. Who knows. Bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
* [This message has been edited by bslicker (04-07-2003 05:38 PM).] |
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