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Hawaiian Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hawaiian Love My lovely wahine I shall never forget your warm embrace, your beautiful face in the glow of this Hawaiian sunset. Hawaiian nights full of delight where romantic love wants to grow. Under the moonlite in the starlite in view of volcanic flow. My Hawaiian love, my precious flower, you shall remain as mysterious to me as this approaching midnight hour. JamesLee March08 2003 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So romantic James. Defiently gets my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
James you make us dream with your hawaiian love. Romantic...with mystery's touch. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James...this is a lovely write! Thank you! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (smiles) I wish for this romance to always fuel your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
from one wahine to a bruddha - my vote is in xxoo wahhhhhh - I miss Kauai . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 03:55 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
You make me so jealous that you live in Hawaii, it's not even 30 degrees here, love your work, but god I'm jealous |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
James, This is beautiful. Love the images and loving thoughts. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely James...this is a gem! ~A hug and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you the loner, Margherita, Sunshine, vandana, Noah, littlewing, passing shadow, rkcraig, regards2you and Enchantress for the lovely responses...James |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Well James, Im Hawaiian, and i think the poem paint a beautiful Picture, Keep It Up Silver_Tryst |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Silver_Tryst for the nice response...james |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
JM, A vote for the romantic! You. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, this is really pretty. "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, James... makes me want to visit Hawaii again. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Makes me want to head straight for the islands for some Honolulu lovin'! Warm hugs, Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Definately one for the book. A lovely piece. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Under the moonlite in the starlite in view of volcanic flow. *** a hot love spot |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Larry, garysgirl, Suthern, Earth Angel, White Rose and Midnitesun for the nice responses...James |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is such a soft, pretty write - I love it. Gets my vote. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We should read this with 'Blue Hawaii' playing in the background. Lovely poem James!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed this lovely piece very much Charisma |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
never been to Hawaii but I can just imagine how beautiful it is to be there and in love... ~A~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I can hardly blame you for not including "wahine" as one of the words you rhymed, JM. Seriously, though, the poem is beautiful for its sentiment. Rack up another vote. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
smiles...a big vote from me...ahhhhh love in Hawaii...nothing like it Poetry is: |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
smiles...a big vote from me...ahhhhh love in Hawaii...nothing like it Poetry is: |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
brought me back home to the watching lava & ocean in the night & kens pancake house or anna millers - lol -ty 4 inspiring memories & I voted |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
brought me back home to the watching lava & ocean in the night & kens pancake house or anna millers - lol -ty 4 inspiring memories & I voted |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
brought me back home to the watching lava & ocean in the night & kens pancake house or anna millers - lol -ty 4 inspiring memories & I voted |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Hey bra, ya got it goin' on. Da poem's it! Shaka bra!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very much enjoyed thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another bump for this one.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Spirit, PoetdeVine, Charisma, Alice, LngJhn, Cheryl, dreambuilder, JP, Sunshine, Olias and Midnitesun for the beautiful responses... dreambuilder I love to eat at the Anna Millers in Pearl City...one of my favorite waitresses works their...James |
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