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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Desire Desire rides a fancy horse. On a very chancy course And each word has flowers scent With nectar waiting to be spent It is a field of shadows lace. With phantoms occupying space With hews of gold and silver true Locked within the simmering stew. It wheels a wile of fantasy With agony and ecstasy It dances in a heated core Waiting for eruptions soar. And when the lava does erupt You pray that it is not corrupt. Desire rides a chancy horse On a very fancy course So think you well the flowers word And the shape of the flying bird |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see Randy stole your pen again ... writing his verse of desire's fire, sin of skin. Passion's curse is our peverbial heaven & hell on earth ... our quest for love's touch begins upon our birth. I say we let that Randy Dragon roar ... otherwise we simply become a bore.   *winkiewinkie*    "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Randy's roaring, he was snoring but he woke up. He does roar but not too often now. LOL WWRS |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour - interesting write this morning! Enjoyed as usual. Hot biscuits and honey are ready....now where is Enchantress with the tea? hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you sweet, I'm sure she'll be along. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour , Your words are always a delight , I loved this fantast flight Hope |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - Desire can get you into trouble every time... Wise words, Sweet Sy... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This day, you have given my mind something to ponder with regard to my particular desire. Thank You |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, dearest friend, desire is a crazy thing to me and it will never stop riding as far as I am concerned until one finds solace and satisfaction in its most comprehending form! (big hugggsssssss) Good morning, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T., I truly do adore thee! Such words of sweet desire Set these pages all afire!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Sy! Warm words on a cold day! Yes..the tea's on...even in the middle of a snowstorm! Yuck! I love your take on desire..did Randy have some say in this one? Enjoy your day Sy! ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Thank you dear you brighten my day. Nan That's what I keep telling Randy, Patricia Ponder is fine it's wonder you have to worry about, LOL Noah, I knew you would say that. Earth Angel Is that a match in your hand? LOL Nancy, Thanks for the WOW it goes well with tea. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Desire rides a chancy horse On a very fancy course ~*~ Are you sure that's not a "Desire rides a fancy horse on a very chancy course..."  Hugs and good morning, Sy! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Good morning Sy, Great wisdom here. "Desire rides a fancy horse" Yes....doesn't it. A real merry-go-round, going around in a circe of nowhere...quite often.... Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine It depends on which takes priority, LOL Pat, Glad you enjoyed, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I especially love the "agony and ecstasy" touch of your desire .... they truly go hand in hand! Very powerful. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita I never tire of desire, though some will stick in the mire. LOL thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Desire rides a fancy horse. On a very chancy course And all too often, we get thrown Breaking heart and cracking bone. I like this very much, Seymour. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Your desire is my admire.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, as you know, I love all your words I ever read. But, I haven't seen this side of Randy before, I don't think.... I certainly do like his words of wisdom with desire, though...... Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-07-2003 02:01 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern All too true, Martie And your admire is my desire. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Everybody has a Randy, LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'It is a field of shadows lace. With phantoms occupying space' I LIKE that thought ! I am desirous of reading more of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a dear, thank you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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