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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-04-06 11:08 AM



I have explained before
Until it seems I am hoarse
There is nothing I want from you
Nothing for you to give
We can talk once or again
Meet for a cup on the odds
Yet nothing more is offered
There is no white picket fence
No apple tree in the yard
You see things for how they aren't
I don't communicate
You don't listen when I do
Being nice you don't hear
Blunt words escape your thoughts
Maybe it's brutal you want
It's just not my style
I don't love you
There's no like involved
Maybe if I changed my phone
You'd just complain to my friends
I can see it's just my bear to cross
The only question I have to ask
Is would you even let me rest in peace

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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Patricia
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1 posted 2003-04-06 11:29 AM


I have been there.  I hope you get the peace you need. Sometimes it just takes a little time before the disappearing act occurs.  
1slick_lady
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2 posted 2003-04-06 02:21 PM


are you........living my life? seems so
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-04-06 02:26 PM


It just may take awhile for it to sink in..
when it does..she'll go.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-04-06 04:04 PM


Brad - thats a heavy cross . . .  my shoulders hurt too . . .  xxoo
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5 posted 2003-04-07 12:28 PM


nope...she wouldn't....gotta be brutal, but you're too nice.

[This message has been edited by KristieSue (04-07-2003 12:37 AM).]

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6 posted 2003-04-07 02:28 AM


Pat- TY.. Let's hope so
1slick-lady- I hope not. No one deserves this.
Enchantress- Thanks for the kind thoughts. I wonder, though...
Sue- the cross isn't what's heavy... it's the BEAR that I have to cross that's heavy lol. Thanks for the kind words.
Kristie- My guess is it's gonna have to wait until August.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-04-07 02:42 AM


lol - I actually thought I read that line wrong too . . . and I did!  
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8 posted 2003-04-07 04:17 AM


like it!
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9 posted 2003-04-07 03:05 PM


LOL Sue I had to figure that out too...

good one

one_thought
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just a state of mind
10 posted 2003-04-07 03:14 PM


Been there done that!!

Good write

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11 posted 2003-04-08 04:32 PM


enjoy
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