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Reflections Of the Moon
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Reflections Of the Moon |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Reflections Of The Moon There she is...than gone...vanished magic reflections of the moon captured her for just an instant Then swallowed...by waves... banished Once carefree...shining...promoting among starlight walking, freely with great words from her pen, spilling To poets...all time...devoting Words her tool...heart said...amazing spinning vowels into singing webs single threads of soul’s purity The Meadow...sang loud...appraising Here she was...not long...eternal knowing hearts feel her presence still as we capture words on paper Memories...kept safely...internal Startime |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Brava! A wonderful entrance to Passions in Poetry! I am so going to enjoy reading your poetry! Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-05-2003 03:48 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thanks...sunshine...it is me the old Startime....new computer and lost all my passwords etc. please forgive for seeming to be new. ***Hugs*** |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a wonderful piece, totally after my heart. Voting. Love, Margherita |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, it is good to have you back....and I love this piece!!! I have a thing about the moon, you see!! This is excellent...  [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-05-2003 03:59 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Yay!!! Oh Karen, is that you? (big angel hugs) Oh Karen, it has been so long since I've read your magical Dream Weaver and Phantom and all that other wonderful poetry, now it is a delight to see you again! I hope you get to post more often now, dearest friend, I hope your jobs are going alright, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome Startime! You certainly couldn't go wrong posting a poem about the moon! As you will discover, many of we Pipsters are mad about the moon!  ---and your lovely poem about her was a "brilliant" selection!Thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful first post of yours!!! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Star - Welcome to PIP! Memories...kept safely...internal you got it! You will love it here . . . xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Startime... I thought I recognised your monika. Welcome Back! Thank you for this beautiful read. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions look forward to read yours more |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OMG, could it be true? are you really you, my friend from the past, the one and only original....STARTIME??? I've been wondering if you would ever return to us. You've been greatly missed, dear poet. CLICK.. CLICK.. CLICK see, now you cannot ever leave us, for you've been captured in 3D. PS first line correx...shouldn't it be then, not than? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-05-2003 06:22 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Karen...you've grown in your writing...good to see you again.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karen, Jaime Fradera is waiting for his computer to be repaired so he can read your new post. He is a big fan of yours, so I thought I'd say hello for him tonight, and welcome back! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Tell Jamie Hi for me and BIG BIG HUGS to you both.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! Is it really you??!!!!!! YES!! YES!! ~Smiles, Hugs, and a vote, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime55 - an excellent write for your first post. My vote is in... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, certainly one for the books from a lady of great words and talent. Good to see you. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
A BEAUTIFUL dedication and tearful as well. A Wonderful write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Safely internal, I like where you're coming from. It's so good to see you again Startime~ I've missed reading you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
New or old, it was a compelling read and a "must be" for the book Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Startime, I'm Ethel, and I came here while you were gone. It sounds like you have a lot of friends here to welcome you back. That's really good. I hope that you'll be able to stay. I really enjoyed your poem and hope to be seeing more of your poetry. And, this is a very good book submission. You have my vote. Hugs, Ethel/garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-06-2003 01:15 AM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
beautiful imagery. i thoroughly enjoyed this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hey! I know you! cool! welcome back! you see you've been missed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
oh, I thought this might be you...hugsss who else could think of that name. I was trying to figure out how I would know that for sure..just had to wait for you to let us know. I have missed your writings M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
<---- crazy about the moon : ) great write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhStartime~ Wondered where you've been. Was hoping it was you ! Lovely word-thoughts~ Welcome home~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Reflections are beautiful!  ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
eternal knowing hearts feel her presence still as we capture words on paper Lovely Lunar tribute... thank you for sharing. MoonShadow . |
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