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He Still Cares
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He Still Cares |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ I heard the sound of thunder clouds Loud enough to shake the house Lightening struck so close to me I think it was coming from the south The dogs were hiding under the bed Alot of good they were to me They barked at every noise they heard Even though there was nothing to see I stepped outside to take a look Not a leaf was blowing on the trees There was only stillness out in the air I could not feel a single breeze I think it must have been God above Letting us know he was still there And no matter what we have done He wanted us to know ~ he still cares 2-27-03 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-28-2003 07:10 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Amen... Lovely, Sue. Very spiritual and inspirational... Warm hugs, Linda |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful I hope it gets in the book. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
an excellent poem Sue, your rhythm is great. hugsss M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wishful thinking maybe, but it would be nice to know someone is up there in our corner, once in a while |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue..I'd love to see this in the book! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very nice!!!! A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nice to read you here Sue!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - glad I seen this one, my vote cast for you... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yes, He is still there and He loves us all and will always be there upstairs, all we must do is ask and He will come on down! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you have my most golden vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I sure am glad that I came back here tonight so that I could vote for your book submission. By the way, friend, this is a very beautiful poem....the poeam and the thoughts. I love it.  . . Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nice to see your entry, and you sure get my vote Sute. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
A wonderful message. I think you are right! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Awesome! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...yes he does still care...and he has ways to remind us...James |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Amen, yes, He is still there He tends to remind me with shooting stars at the moments I last want Him to. But thats a long story  Love it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your kind and encouraging replies. I have never recieved as much encouragment from anyone before, as I have recieved from all of you. If I had, maybe I might have accomplished more than I have in my life. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nicely said, Sue...  |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Really nice poem. Your life isn't over, by the way, and you are still accomplishing great things! fh |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Good selection. And, as you know, he'll always care. Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW Sue, that was just a beautiful poem you've penned here. Loved it and I'm on my way to the voting box. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Very nice poem Sue, it has my vote |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sue, an absolute for the book... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful entry for the book Sue ! hugs to you, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Yes he does... enjoyed the poem. Deb |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
a poem worth 'voting' for! Rf |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - wow, powerful write, nicely done... My vote is in... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Ah yes He is there, and he has given you quite a talent. Beautiful poem Sue. |
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bnabors Junior Member
since 2007-10-08
Posts 20 |
Sue, no wonder it was published it was awesome. GOD LOVES YOU AND SO DO I. Bob N. |
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