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Calendar Of Thoughts - Acrostically So |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*Marge Tindal~* Just a little case oF Anxiety of this versE Now I cannot tell A fiB Unless this becomes youR Arrangement for a SenyrU Raising the ante,I say,AhA Yearning to finish this yeaR .....................seeMinglY ........................Arriving .....at a conclusion, foRegone ........................Coming in ........................Heralding A new song sung on Precious spring voices Rumbling with the Images of Spring's Laughter.............Merrily .....................Alluding to .....................Yearnings of Joy Unearthed in Naked abandon of Erstwhile pursuits of Jubilant ......................Undertakings ......................Laying .................merelY Amongst the Unique flowerbeds of Granted wishes Undeniably Seeking a special Touch from handS ...............Epitomizing the ...............Pampering of ...............The ...............Embryo of thought ...............Maturing in the ...............Blending of minds ...............Equalizing the ...............Rationality Of Concientious Thoughts Orbiting the Boundries of Eternity and Returning to Nest in .............Ordinary .............Vagueness of questioned .............Epistles .............Marking the vestiges of .............Belief in .............Eternal life and .............Ruminating with Dedications of Ethereal Considerations Emanating from Manifestations Borne on the light of Eternal truths of the Return of the Messiah *From the Poetry Workshop Forum Sure it’s a regurgitated piece … but I’m NOT buying ANY more Excedrin !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
only you could captivate the imagination so much  suddenly I like all the months of the year  Thanksregards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (04-05-2003 12:31 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !!!! This is wonderful Marge! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Marge! Your creativity never ceases to amaze me! Wonderful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my heavens, gal!!! Simply TYPING this would be a major pain... I can't imagine the effort that went into the writing... but I do appreciate it! *S* Nest in ordinary vagueness... was I born in the right month or what??? LOL This is beautiful, Marge... and I love the tender ending. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Marge, this is brilliant on so many levels. Beyond the sheer poetic genious of form and thought, your readers will now be reminded of you every month, of every year, for the rest of their lives!--me included! Veeery clever of you! LOL Luvya sweetums! Linda |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Holy Cow! This is amazing! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh dear lady this is extraordinary!!! I was dizzy just reading it, never mind trying to figure out the format. No wonder you needed so much Excedrin~~ No one can write like you ... Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
M y oh! My! Marge O nly you could N ote the months T o sing the songs H eld deep in our heart S..................... Kudos!!! Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was really creative, Marge. I like how you managed to flow from one month to the next.  ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Amazing indeed!! Gave me a headache just wondering how you did it.  |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
LOL, I'm amazed by your work as always.  Eliza Simmons |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Geesh Marge, didn't you know what to do with your spare time WOW girl you rock acrostic all year round! Superb, really I can imagine you formatting this stuff LOL tongue between your lips, eyes on focus, don't want to hear all the words you'v uttered during this formatting  HUGS and knuffels too, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful and wonderfully creative Marge! WHOOOHOOO!! You go girl! Show us how it's done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a year, What a way to paint it! No exodrin for me but these lines make my head spin with wonder. "Orbiting the Boundries of Eternity and Returning to Nest in .............Ordinary .............Vagueness of questioned .............Epistles" So I guess that means October and November are my months to dream. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow.. very creative Marge, I can see alot of time was put int ot his gem. adding to my library Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some undertaking... *s very creative... hugss M |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: So clever! No wonder you had a headache though! Your brain must have been exhausted by the time you finished! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW!! What a creative way to show a year round..... ((Hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetFriends~ Thank you all so very much. This actually is one of those pieces that amazes even the poet ! The thoughts came so easily and THEN the formatting began. Whew ! But I appreciate that you each found something to enjoy in it~ I have learned so much from dipping into the Poetry Workshop ... (Tee-He ! ... they swear I spend all my time on the playground !) But the secret is found sifting in the sandbox ... LOTS of thoughts found there~  *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my buddy~ I don't know how I missed this before, and I'm sorry that I did. But, I'm sure smiling at you NOW. This is pure Marge, and I LOVE IT! Big HUGS,  ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge you have out done yourself with this. I'm sure it took a long time to do this. I love it. Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My stars ! Had a friend ask me the other night at dinner EXACTLY what I found so thrilling about writing poetry~ Hmmm, promised to look this one up for him and by gadfry if THIS doesn't tell him what THRILLS me ... nothing will~ For JIM ... you see what I mean ? Love you, my dearest friend~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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