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Gamble
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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 It's a gamble I guess the love between two who ever knows really what tomorrow may hold I'll ante my heart you ante your life together we'll strive forever the goal So what will it be are you up for the risk is the price set just right or is it too high for you We're in this a team I bet it'll work just hold my hand and gamble with me Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you know what KristiSue? Exactly....... I like this and will look for more |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks Brian! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - you said it all right here: just hold my hand and gamble with me Exactly! I loved this . . . xxoo |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Not too many people willing to take the risk. Well said!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Neat! And yes, I guess it's worth a gamble. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wow really nice KristieSue |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks! I appreciate the encouragement! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Teamwork is the name of the game, you got that right. Nice poem KristieSue~  I hope the odds will favor you! |
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