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I May Dream You Into Being
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I May Dream You Into Being |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Sparkling water as blue as sapphires An icy crispness in the air Here I am at one with nature Amongst beauty so rich and rare An eagle catches the thermals His next meal he hopes to seek His eyes are ever watchful As he scours the mountain peak I search the hidden valleys As far as the eye can see The only thing that's missing Is your presence beside me A jewel in the crown of nature Is what I am now seeing As I gently close my eyes And try to dream you into being I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (02-18-2003 09:15 PM).] |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
This is remarkable writing! I love this part.... A jewel in the crown of nature Is what I am now seeing As I gently close my eyes And try to dream you into being ;clapping:  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Sue: Lovely poem! Looks like my kind of country! Betty Lou Hebert |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh wow that was beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing! It's given me the lift I needed!!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing... Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is truly beautiful Sue Cold hands means a warm heart |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
this was quite cool. i especially like the the bit about an eagle catching a thermal - it kept the poem so real. -majnu |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me shed a tear as whenever I see such gorgeous visions of nature I think of my dream girl who I long ever to see her for the first time and find out her name and hold her hand! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, I voted for it because I want to see this gem so much in Reflections, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue! This is one for the book for sure!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. A picture may be worth a thousand words, but your words paint a beautful picture! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Got my vote also,beautiful write. Jason |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well done! --and we came pretty close to doing an accidental duet -- /pip/Forum64/HTML/000300.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sitting with mouth hanging open |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully penned  Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Simply fantastic...way to go Sue...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fabulous writing, we Victorians are Talented aren't we? *grin Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just lovely! *S* Can I come visit? LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I wish that the picture could go with it in the bood. Either way, it's beautiful, friend...  (I lost the address for the other place where your poms are. Could you tell me again? I never did finish reading all your poems. Thanks... Ethel  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My goodness that is beautiful Sue, and you sure have my vote, a bit late but you got it |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is BEAUTIFUL....one my favorites so far!!! LOVED IT!!! Reminds me of home...and hiking in the mountains!!!! Bridette |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A jewel in the crown of nature Is what I am now seeing As I gently close my eyes And try to dream you into being" awww....wow, I just love this part... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue~ This is truly beautiful. I enjoyed the read. hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very beautiful... thanks for the read... regards, sudhir |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
beautiful ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Excellent write. And a bonus, a picture of home sweet home! Way cool and thanks.  You have my vote you know. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - a'hhh, I finally have found your writing... My vote for this... BC |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Absolutely beautiful poem! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, this so touched my heart. I am sitting here listening to a CD by Secret Garden and the music, your words and your picture just seem to flow along together. Hugs, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is just beautiful. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Beautiful poetry Sue - loved it - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No dream, I finally got here long enough to leave a note... I must have read this four times... with subsequent interruptions... Well done, Sue! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
to dream into being yes sue we have all done that arthur aka michael |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This must have been posted when my computer was down. It is lovely. Joyce |
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