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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-04-04 11:50 AM


round and round the words
I step around the words
the words the words the words the
words the words round and round
the words the onslaught
never ending
reasoning is now ominously
unrighteous and sanity is retreating
behind the words the words
the words
words words words
the
words
I cannot stop them
hatred and bitterness have stolen
my defenses
round and round the words I go
each step closer
to the all consuming
darkness

in recognition of desperation
I look up

there are still
stars in the heavens

the world has not ended
as I had supposed

there is a higher power of whom
I had selfishly over looked…
My stomping had covered
His prompting

patiently He waited
for me to ask

Father take these words
they are but tools of torture.
Lord I accept your guidance
and ask humbly for peace
from the words.
Amen.



the words the words
they now sing effortlessly-
halleluiah oh my savior
the words the words
thank yous abound
round and round I climb
with each step I try to imagine
myself closer to the
light

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (04-04-2003 12:57 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-04-04 11:54 AM


My dear jellybeans, you do not have to imagine that you are near the light, it is radiating from you! A very up-lifting poem--literally!
Things sound like they are getting better for you. Keep the faith, Dear One.

Loving hugs,
EA

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2 posted 2003-04-04 12:48 PM


My stomping had covered
His prompting

I love these lines... how well they describe the fact that we so often pray and then forge ahead full steam, too busy to listen for answers. *S* Excellent write!

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-04-04 12:53 PM


Oh my this is wonderful...so well written.
Very very uplifting!
Enjoyed so very much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

jellybeans
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4 posted 2003-04-04 12:58 PM


thank you ladies...sometimes I get it right, sometimes wrong...this one ended up right *smile*
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