Open Poetry #25 |
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Copper Pennies |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside ![]() |
It's the little things that count like copper pennies in a well a wish is just a wish unlike the giving of ourselves. We can hold our breath on high and shade the sunlight from our eyes we can dream a little dream but we can't save our place in heaven. The days will come and go but what a difference they have made grateful for this time and the sharing of our souls. If tomorrow never comes I wanted you to know. ~*~ |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a sweet and gentle way to say it! I love this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
geez Blue - this is lovely - what a sweet soul you have and yes - so very true: If tomorrow never comes I wanted you to know. what am amazingly simple thing which we tend to forget - thanks for reminding me . . . xxoo |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ I REALLY enjoyed this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great way to put across gentle thoughts... regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - this is a very priceless write. Many thoughts went into this... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, This is just precious! One word more about it would ruin the genuine feeling of it. Okay four more, so talented, you are! Greatly enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...I like this so much, sort of reads like a song. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your copper pennies are pure gold... Lovely thoughts, lovely sentiments. A sweet and gentle write. Love & Light, EA |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Penned with great style and grace, much enjoyed thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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