Open Poetry #25 |
Copper Pennies |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the little things that count like copper pennies in a well a wish is just a wish unlike the giving of ourselves. We can hold our breath on high and shade the sunlight from our eyes we can dream a little dream but we can't save our place in heaven. The days will come and go but what a difference they have made grateful for this time and the sharing of our souls. If tomorrow never comes I wanted you to know. ~*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a sweet and gentle way to say it! I love this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
geez Blue - this is lovely - what a sweet soul you have and yes - so very true: If tomorrow never comes I wanted you to know. what am amazingly simple thing which we tend to forget - thanks for reminding me . . . xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ I REALLY enjoyed this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great way to put across gentle thoughts... regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - this is a very priceless write. Many thoughts went into this... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, This is just precious! One word more about it would ruin the genuine feeling of it. Okay four more, so talented, you are! Greatly enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...I like this so much, sort of reads like a song. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your copper pennies are pure gold... Lovely thoughts, lovely sentiments. A sweet and gentle write. Love & Light, EA |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Penned with great style and grace, much enjoyed thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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