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light and shadow --- #6000
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light and shadow --- #6000 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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sometimes silence speaks easier than lyrical phrases when the full moon plants soft light on a divine face; unveiling~ slowly parting dreamy eyelids to disclose the contained gems and in the lurking shadows a pair of hypnotised eyes roam busily in an attempt to swim the waters of the lady’s heart; shrouded~ like a desperate student trying to impress his teacher |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Bravo, young friend! Well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is certainly nothing wrong with this right! Kudos on a fine write, dear Sudhir!  Love & Light, Linda |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ooohhhh so lovely Sudhir ~ your words just flowed...CONGRATULATIONS on 6,000!!!!! Bonnie |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir...I like the dark feeling to this, the quiet desperation. Congrats to you..I'm glad to see you back writing more!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sudhir!! Congratulations on your 6,000th post! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir Iyer - another great writing from your pen... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sudhir, this is a beautiful 6000th post, sweet friend, yay, I love the analogies you make as there is nothing wrong in wanting to confess such strong feelings even when it feels so guilty! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, yay, I can't wait to read thousands more from yor golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write! Congrats on your 6000th!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
happy swimming  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words Sudhir...congratulations on 6000...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes silence speaks easier than lyrical phrases when the full moon plants soft light on a divine face; unveiling~ ==================================== heres to 6000 "brilliant" posts...like this lovely offering. Congrats Poet Sir...way to go ..way to write Sud  "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write, and once again, Congratulations smiling one! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"sometimes silence speaks easier than lyrical phrases when the full moon plants soft light on a divine face; unveiling~ slowly parting dreamy eyelids to disclose the contained gems" What a wonderful piece... I love the imagery, and the emotion you gave us is evident. Congrats on 6000! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You are all so very kind.... Many thanks for all your replies and generous words... Regards, sudhir |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sudhir, why isn't this a book submission? a pair of hypnotised eyes roam busily in an attempt to swim the waters of the lady’s heart; shrouded~ these three lines take the cake..kudos to such imagery-packed lines and congrats to your 6000! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - this is amazing! shrouded~ like a desperate student trying to impress his teacher so very sweet . . . xxoo |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very enjoyable poem, and enjoyed seeing your photo too. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
stripped to the bones or clothed in veils, your work is always magnificent. Congratulations on 6000 posts. What an achievement! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful images Sudi. Maree |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sudhir, This is such a soft write. Beautiful.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My sincere thanks to each of you kind souls... Regards, Sudhir |
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