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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2003-04-03 08:11 PM

Each day I seek
to free my mind,
to know the how,
understand the why
of You,
as revealed by the
acts of Humankind.

Within the breeze
I feel your hand,
upon the seas
You make your stand
in mighty peaks
of roaring waves,
from early morning,
to the end of days.

And if it were not
for Nature’s caress,
I fear I’d give up
under Life’s duress.
So when the blue skies
do threaten to fall
I follow my heart,
and heed your call

the Being I hope
is greater than Man.

***

May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-03 08:17 PM

...and they are tangible moments
this effort to achieve
that freeing of mind...

I know...because I've tried...
and I know you know...because I see
it here...

Ah Kacy...a good write!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-04-03 08:19 PM

thanks, Karilea

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-04-04 03:50 AM

Yes at times this "valley of tears" seems so hard to walk and we do not find answers to our sufferings and still .... you see His presence and hear His voice in the beauty and in the song of Nature.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-04-04 06:01 PM

Each day I seek
to free my mind,
to know the how,
understand the why
of You,
as revealed by the
acts of Humankind.

Within the breeze
I feel your hand,
upon the seas
You make your stand
in mighty peaks
of roaring waves,
from early morning,
to the end of days
====================

I love the perspective and theme you wrote this with...
seek on Kacy-girl it makes for mighty fine poetry

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-04-04 06:09 PM

Thank you very much, Margherita, and JM.

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2003-04-04 06:09 PM

simply beautiful!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-04-04 06:10 PM

thanks, hello, and welcome again new poet friend

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2003-04-04 06:25 PM

the Being I hope
is greater than Man. (hope so!!!)

Your style is so distinct,
You stand apart, I think.
Without your face at hand
We'd still know where you stand.

Love to read you. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-04-04 06:26 PM

nice read

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-04-04 11:27 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I don't know if we will ever know, but I pray an answer or resolution can be found and all can amend and hone! (sigh) This is a very introspective write, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2003-04-05 12:04 PM

Kacy,
I'll always love your perspective...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-04-05 02:45 AM

I think I've given up on trying to understand why...good writing!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-04-05 08:57 AM

Thanking each one of you for sharing a moment with me. Your replies are like warm hugs.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-04-05 04:06 PM

I suppose that I'm convinced that the Being is greater than man...no doubt...James

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

15 posted 2003-04-05 04:08 PM

Your whole poem gives us one of natures most beautiful hugs...Each day...Wonderful

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

16 posted 2003-04-05 05:12 PM

Very inspiring!
Eric

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

17 posted 2003-04-06 06:06 AM

Kacy - this is beautiful - soul sister you sure are . . . thank you - this one made me smile - as you always seem to do . . . xxoo

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

18 posted 2003-04-06 06:31 AM

Enjoyed this gem.

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

19 posted 2003-04-07 06:23 AM

a bit of questioning?
presently expected but your heart knows
good points love this piece

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-07-2003 06:25 AM).]

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