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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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The bright-eyed Kite Struggling against The wind of turbulent years Efforting to find a Calm pocket within the swirl In which She can rest, Regain her strength * * * * * The lively Kestrel Ever moving In her searching spiral Questing for her sustenance The morsel That may sate her yearning Quell her doubt * * * * * The gentle Dove Nested in the cloisters Wearing her mourning grays And morning pinks Warms her progeny Sweetly At her breast Could take freedoms’ flight But stays And gives love |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
three wings trinocular perception from you sir laurels |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Was groping for a word -- trinocular, yes! Well done, Ed Ed ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Efforting to find a Calm pocket within the swirl In which She can rest, Regain her strength'' ~ You are a marvel to read.....well done, with so much to offer within the words! Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx...you see with wings! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - this is lovely - a true testament to what you truly see - and I thank you for seeing what you do . . . always amazing me with your words xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-02-2003 05:13 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
wranx - excellent write, the more I read it, the more it became... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I always read your poetry more than once. Each time I get more meaning from it. But still can't find the proper description of how I truly love it. You are an amazing writer, friend. Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Efforting to find a Calm pocket within the swirl Stellar? (to quote one of my favorite poets) Ok, this was stunning, one of your best! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
uh....let me go read it again...and again...and again... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And so those gentle wings have opted to remain grounded for the moment? This is amazingly beautiful Ed, on so many levels. Smiling here. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweet sweet man. You are a sage in yeti fur.  You are so calming. Sometimes I feel like such a live wire and your words, just ground me. sigh. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Loved this Ed and I agree about the winged creature |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a gentle and very enjoyable read. Thankyou for this wranx. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
a lovely tribute indeed you write with conviction |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
As much as I enjoy reading your observations, I enjoy what you elicit from your peers... thank you, Sir... a lovely read... [This message has been edited by Lady In White (04-07-2003 09:36 AM).] |
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