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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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My head hurts My dreams ache When it's your name That falls upon my lips I can't reach you But I guess That's ok Perhaps some other Time or maybe someday I want to cradle your insecurities Fall madly in love With you Your words Your presence Your aura I want to be your friend But I don't want to scare you away Nor do I want to scare myself I'm stuck somewhere between These dreams of intuition Filled with hope I just don't know If I should even bother anymore Cause look at where I always tend to end up Crying, on all fours Infront of you.. Always you.. A complete total stranger... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I felt this..and have known it except for the crying on all fours  M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - mannn - I am watching you soar here, my friend - THIS IS AMAZING - I know this: I want to cradle your insecurities Fall madly in love With you Your words Your presence Your aura I want to be your friend amazing . . . xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
God Kris I wish i had the words, no more crying at all please |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ceinwyn, this is a very emotional write that has so much heart in it. The pain is felt in it. And the "crying on all fours" was a unique twist of words that I liked. Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
My head hurts My dreams ache When it's your name That falls upon my lips I can't reach you 19 powerful words nice write - I liked it |
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