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one_thought Junior Member
since 2003-04-03
Posts 23just a state of mind |
 Returns to Calm Days or nights Lonely without you When you are away Lifes amiss Loneliness sets Missing you Until you return Like magic Your smile Your voice Your touch Calms the feeling Even if for A short time Serenity Poof your gone Lonely again Upon your return Mystically feelings My heart My mind Returns to Calm [This message has been edited by one_thought (04-03-2003 02:37 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! very touching write! Welcome to Passions!  Looking forward to more! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions one_thought. I hope that you will have future thoughts for us to be displayed poetically...  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
one_thought, this is a really good first post. I really enjoyed it, and know the feeling very well. I look forward to reading more of your work. And.......  Heart Hugs,  Ethel....garysgirl |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
one thought - this is beautiful! Welcome to PIP! Excellent first post: Like magic Your smile Your voice Your touch Calms the feeling Yes I know this feeling well - you will love it here . . . xxoo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, Welcome to Passions, what a very touching first post....  you will love it here!please check your email for a special greeting Lauren/Greeneyes~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Like magic Your smile Your voice Your touch" "Upon your return Mystically feelings My heart My mind Returns to Calm" 2 very very good parts of this poem Welcome to passions Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Nice entrance my friend. Welcome and well met! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions. Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, this is very emotionally captivating and glowing with warmth! Yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
know exactly how you feel...nicely done *s M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions, one_thought. Hoping to see more thoughts from you, as these were enjoyable. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
wow - can I relate to this one this was a great write look forward to more |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...helen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneThought~ Welcome to the ever-growing circle of Passions~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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