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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-04-02 08:41 PM


“PASSIONATE THOUGHTS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When I lie here on satin sheets,
in a bed soft with feelings of you,
my eyes close to enter a dream,
of things to you I would do…

Passionate thoughts float by surreal,
deeply within of all your pleasures,
affection different than known before,
in a time of now of loves showers…

My being lies gently on pillows soft,
breath caresses warm upon my face,
to know you once, and then again,
is to not forget your mystical embrace…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-02 09:24 PM


Very seductive write Bill - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-04-02 09:51 PM


well done my friend. . . you have no idea how much I've missed your words. . .



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littlewing
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3 posted 2003-04-02 10:05 PM



Bill - as always - just lovely writing - always so sweet . . .  xxoo

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4 posted 2003-04-02 10:07 PM


Aptly named...the feel of chiffon.
Nicely done. TD

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5 posted 2003-04-02 10:10 PM


...evocative to say the very least...

Love & Light,
EA

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6 posted 2003-04-02 10:26 PM


Very soft and sensual Bill...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2003-04-02 10:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful poetry does! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, always hang onto those thoughts and make a blanket out of them that you can forever rest peacefully under, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-04-03 02:11 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-04-03 02:14 PM


Nice write, Enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-04-03 02:51 PM


*sigh* thanks for sharing your Passionate Thoughts

Charisma

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11 posted 2003-04-04 12:07 PM


Bill...What a romantic poem!!!! Your passionate thoughts echoing through the mind, wafting across the heart. As always, you write exquisitely. ***Ivy Rose
Larry C
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12 posted 2003-04-04 12:29 PM


Bill,
Ever the romance...don't stop writing.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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13 posted 2003-04-04 12:33 PM


Bill, such a dreamy and romantic write.
So beautiful. You know that I love it.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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