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In Wait of Thee ( for Lady Ollyne)
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In Wait of Thee ( for Lady Ollyne) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Beneath the shadows of the moon, I wished upon night's sea. Stretching towards the heavens, stepped I, into world of Thee. I laid this head 'pon pillowed thoughts, to dream and touch thy soul. The beating of mine heart was raised, its rhythm lost control. Dreamt I, in the nightfall, of thine eyes that shine their blue. If one glance was all it took, this heart fell in their hue. You've stolen mine, it's in thy keep, forever in thine hold. Treasured are these words I seek, as day begins its fold. You've tasked him one too many, as the days drone on and on. Father's wish uncounted now, it's I who needs thy pawn. A guarantee, a pledge of love, this Lady wishes for, To lift me when e'er the morn has come, each day of evermore. She waits for thee, this Lady, mine, pens for all to see Her Knight of blue, has chiseled heart of hers in wait of Thee. Lady O [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-03-2003 05:15 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Brad...I sometimes write as The Lady Ollyne or Alicethruglass. Thought I would bring this one back for a bit. *s M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cant ever have too many sonnets in the book... rhymes divine...lovely! "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Janet...and Lady O says she appreciates your response  hugs M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this side of you, my fair lady! Hugging thee~ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lady Ollyne, This reads just like the classical poems of old. You have so much talent, dear Lady. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ooooooopppsssss!!  (forgot to vote) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-03-2003 10:03 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Lady O...James |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I love this!!! Beautiful write. ~ Bonnie |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Maureen - I'd love to see it included...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovely sonnet! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Tell lady O she wrote a beautiful sonnet. Getting my vote for sure Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh.....I had forgotten how the magic of your words always had a way of melting my heart and sending me into fantasy land....so incredibly good to read the beauty of your words again. [This message has been edited by Startime55 (04-05-2003 06:45 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Maureen, this is lovely, sweet friend, Lady Olynne truly has the classic spirit in her heart and poetry and her knight shall come and sweep her off her feet and onto the white sterling of love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lady Ollyne is resting tonight but left me with words of thanks for all of you who have responded It's been fun writing as different personalties. But it's hard to be the Lady Ollyne when she rarely has her knight responding...so if in the future anyone wishes to be her Knight she will show her gratitude in poetic thank you's. M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I missed this one and can't figure out how I did my lady. My vote is in... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can always count on you Bill, especially when the Lady is around. M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful....... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Ahhh Truley a wonderous read!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Connie and AJ thank you both for stopping to read *s M/Lady O |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very beautiful. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The M I've always longed to see and love to read! Awesome. What a journey from there to here. You're the best. In the book it must be... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I have always enjoyed Lady O's poetry, add a vote. [This message has been edited by Tim (04-06-2003 11:54 AM).] |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Nicely done Ms. O. You have my vote. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know I understand why you write for her... and you did it with the style and grace she well deserves... bless your heart... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Chanson, thank you Thank you Larry, some days I am just like the Lady, living in my own castle and in my own world..sometimes it beats the real thing Tim, thank you. Glad you enjoy her...I am her every late summer at the MD Renaissance Festival for abut 8 weeks. Such a fantasy land that becomes an adult playground. hugs to all M/Lady O |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's so nice to see you Ariana,I hope all is well. ~Smiles and thanks~ M Karlea, thank you. Some days I confuse myself. I originally wanted to post it in the Lady's name but you know those personalities sometimes pull a fast one on you and the strongest survives the moment. Truthfully I previewed it and it always goes back to nakdthoughts and I forgot to check it again.. so she won out this time hugss M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 , Lady Ollyne!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
click! one more! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ Oh how I like this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel, Dixie and Marge hugssssss and many thanks. I enjoyed being Lady Ollyne and am pleased she will be in Reflections. M/A/O |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
just bringing it forward in case it needs to be found easier...since it no longer shows in reflections M |
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