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May Forever Never Fade Away
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May Forever Never Fade Away |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I just can't seem to grip this Your every kiss Is memorable. I can't seem to hold this Moment in my arms For ever And ever And may forever Never Fade Away. I can't seem to love you Enough, I thought I'd bust Wide open in your arms From the love that fills my lungs Each time I inhale And resonates... It will never go away. No bother... Resonated love Leaves a taste Of your lips On my own When you're gone. And I relive Your kisses Over and over And I pray On my knees That forever Will never Fade Away. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. --Chang Tzu [This message has been edited by KoKo (04-11-2003 10:36 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
resonates  I enjoyed this read KoKo |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Hey, thanks! I knew it didn't look right to me!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are welcome, as I knew you didn't mean plastic love resinate=plastic residue |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Hehehe, thanks again...  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
KoKo,this is very nice Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
good job on this one hon. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Great Job! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you much carol, Eddles, and lost_star! ^_^ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Koko, if you believe in it, forever will be yours!! Great write, my friend! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lauren: And I pray On my knees That forever Will never Fade this sings - I loved it! nice write xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful thoughts! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Know what you mean...James |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you all very, very much I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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