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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Displaced I'm watching from a distance and feel the ache of why. In silence making notes to self in dreamless state, am I. The remains of touch from hands had reached and brought me to this maze, of ins and outs and ups and downs, a labyrinth of ways. I circle round and always end up wanting more of time. But shadows in the darkness tend to only lend me rhyme. Those words that often wished were meant for me but never are, bring me back to Earth to wonder, is distance just too far. Perhaps, deception plays a part and I'm, myself, deceived thinking there's someone in whom can share what I believed. Giving up, it may be time, for all around I see the happiness that others find but never reaches me. I always thought that I would find, or feel again such love. But time has worn and rhymes no longer replace the meaning of... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-04-2003 06:09 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sad, but so beautifully written. Sometimes, even time is not enough. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 thanks, just feeling a little sorry for myself at the moment...it too shall pass M |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
beautifully written. it's a shame that often the best poetry comes from the worst experiences. ~HUGS~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, I'm there with you...you write me well |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nakd: Perhaps, deception plays a part and I'm, myself, deceived thinking there's someone in whom can share what I believed. I know this too . . . awesome write xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear M, so well written that it touches deeply. This is only a temporary state believe me. I have gone through this too ... life is motion, we are never really stuck in our darkness. Sunshine for you. Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
... life is motion, we are never really stuck in our darkness. Sunshine for you. I hope that's true. Thank you all. hugss M |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, since I've gotten behind in my reading the beautiful poetry on here, I decided to go to some of the pages from a few days ago. I'm finding some really good poems I would have missed. This is certainly one of them. I know I've probably told you before, but you have such an ability of being able to write the feelings inside of you. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You've got company Maureen~ We're just in the midst of a twist of fate. Lets just hope it doesn't go on forever!! This was sadly beautiful... Love and hugs to you~ |
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