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0 posted 2003-04-02 05:36 PM


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I am so glad you are there
listening for my heart call
Knowing you will always be
to catch me when I fall

You know how much I need
to feel your love so dear
Even when we are apart
to feel each other near

No matter what the distance
or between us be the space
Whenever our hearts call each other
before my eyes I see your face

Seeing your loving smile
as you tenderly look at me
Deep into your eyes
nothing but love I see

In a quiet gentle breeze
if listening close we hear
A soft whisper of love
to each other we hear clear

Yes, I am so glad you are there
listening for my heart call
Knowing you will always be
to catch me when I fall
~~~~  


© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-02 05:40 PM



...and catch you, he always will, Dear girl of Gary!

Your words actually caused my heart to flutter with the innocent beauty of them.

Love & Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-04-02 06:02 PM


garysgirl
May you fall into a feather bed
Or the arms that he has spread.
Enjoyed the read

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3 posted 2003-04-02 06:06 PM


Ethyl, this is so sweet and so beautifully done. Would that everyone have this love in their lives and in their hearts.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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4 posted 2003-04-02 06:38 PM


I'm sure he will always be there to catch you
should you fall Ethel.
Beautiful piece here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2003-04-02 06:52 PM


Thank you, Linda. I appreciate you
so much, friend.
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-04-02 06:53 PM


Thank you, Seymour.
That's so sweet.....
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-02 07:08 PM


loved it
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8 posted 2003-04-02 08:17 PM


Thank you so very much, Vandana.
I'm glad that you liked it.  
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-04-02 11:12 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, it is a beautiful feeling to find a soft place to fall and I dream ever so much I can carry a girl in my arms and lift her happily to the stars! (kiss on cheek) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-04-03 01:17 PM


All i can say is WOW!!!
Being caught always

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11 posted 2003-04-03 01:17 PM


aw! just beautiful Ethel!
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12 posted 2003-04-03 01:35 PM


Noah, oh yes...he's always right
there to catch me. Thank you, friend.  
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one_thought, thank you very much. I
appreciate your reading and replying
to my poem. And, welcome to
Passions In Poetry.  
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Dixie, thank you, sweet friend.  
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Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-04-03 08:08 PM


Yes, I am so glad you are there
listening for my heart call
Knowing you will always be
to catch me when I fall


You are most fortunate to have a strong and loving guy like your Gary. I hope you never fall, but grateful he will be there for you.

Hugs and luvs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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14 posted 2003-04-03 11:58 PM


garysgirl - so nice to have someone to catch one when they fall. Nice warm write...

BC

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15 posted 2003-04-04 12:19 PM


Hey Sweet Marti,
Thank you so much for your sweet reply.
Yes, I'm so glad that he's strong for me.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-04-04 12:21 PM


Thank you very much, Bill  
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-04-04 12:31 PM


Ethel,
Love...you doesn't get better than that! Sweet.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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18 posted 2003-04-04 12:42 PM


Thank you, Larry. I
appreciate that.  

Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

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19 posted 2003-04-04 02:25 AM


Ethel - what a beauiful feeling to be able to fall - knowing you will be caught . . .
I loved this and you too - an angel *wink*
xxoo

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20 posted 2003-04-05 01:39 PM


Oh yes, Sue, it is a wonderful feeling to
know that Gary loves me unconditionally.
He love me even with all my moods I seem to
keep falling back into. He is the most patient
person I have ever known.
Thank you, friend, for your sweet words.
Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

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