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open letter to you |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
i am alone most--surrounded by loved ones they talk talk and talk i try, to listen i really do i lie to you to myself this hurts me but you care nothing for that i could take your hate i could take your love but what i can not and will not accept is your indifference. in my darkest hours i see you hoping for comfort but what i get-- is one FAT slap in the face. the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This hurts ... your words are powerful. Hopefully things will change. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of a woman that I tried to get close to and never could...because of her indifference...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
noah - this is amazing - can relate well: but what i can not and will not accept is your indifference. Awesome write . . . xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooouch! Well, I suppose a slap in the face is a far cry from showing indifference! --but I really do understand what you are saying. Indifference kills! Warm hugs, EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Pain bleeds through your words. My heart felt it all. Wonderful writing. |
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