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OLIAS
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0 posted 2003-04-04 12:52 PM


Can’t shake this heartache (now  your gone)
(80’s soul/rock stomp)
(Re-post and complete from open 12 )


(Intro)

Verse 1
Can’t help the feelin’ somethin’s wrong,
I can’t understand what’s goin’ on,
You used to be so good to me,
You used to set my spirit free,
Can’t shake this heartache now you’re gone.

Chorus
You used to make my life complete,
Lay the world out at my feet,
Fill my life with your desire,
Girl, you took me higher and higher,
(yeah, yeah)

Verse 2
Can’t spend my lifetime without you,
A searchin’ round!    (Two chord stab)
For somethin’ new,
The tears I cried are all in vain,
I need your love to ease my pain,
Can’t shake this heartache now your gone..
(na na no no no )

Chorus

Verse 3
Can’t find direction now your gone,
Can’t see no point in goin’ on,
Your memories still here with me,
And that’s the place I need to be,
Can’t shake this heartache now you’re gone.

Verse 4
Can you believe me when I say,
There’s only you!  (Two chord stab)
No other way,
There is no sun my life is blue,
Tell me honey, what am I gonna do,
Can’t shake this heartache now your gone..
(na na no no no)

Chorus
Instrumental

You used to be so good to me
You used to set my spirit free
The tears I cried are all in vain
I need your love to ease my pain.

Instrumental

(whisper)  You used to make my life complete (guit. answer)
(louder)   Lay the world out at my feet    (guit. answer)
(louder)   Fill my life with your desire   (guit. answer)
(full on)  Girl you take me higher and higher..
(and higher )

(full band outro to fade )

Words and music by Olias.

[This message has been edited by OLIAS (04-04-2003 12:54 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-04-04 01:06 PM


completely loved this....makes me want to hear it on my radio!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-04-04 01:47 PM


OLIAS!  I love this!  I'm going to copy my brother - who is also into music - to share with him this wonderful piece!  It's soooo good to have you back here in the blue pages!
Martie
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3 posted 2003-04-04 02:44 PM


Excellent song, Oias!!!
OLIAS
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4 posted 2003-04-05 01:17 PM


Sea :

Thank you for your kind reply I'm glad you enjoyed.

Sunshine:
I hope your brother approves, I recorded this song among some others and one day when I have time I will post it on my website, Thank you for your kind reply.

Martie:
So glad you enjoyed thanks for replying,
Take care.

Regards to all,
Olias.

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