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Magnolia Blossom - duet by Bill Charles & Littlewing
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Magnolia Blossom - duet by Bill Charles & Littlewing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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“MAGNOLIA BLOSSOM” I picked a blossom from a Magnolia tree in the meadow and gave it to you, and you placed it in your hair of silk ringlets that flowed with the gentle breeze…, Hearts sang in tune beneath the moonlit sky, scent of flowers carried upon the breeze, sweet upon my soul… I was in awe of your beauty as I gazed into eyes softer than a summer night, and I was taken with the enchantment of you… Whispers in the night beckoned my still soft heart, a solemn concerto of strings dancing in step with an angel… My heart beats with desires warm, as I’m drawn closer to one with a magnolia blossom in her hair… All I am able to do is sigh your memory, it lives with my every breath . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-02-2003 02:12 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, that was the nicest romantic little ditty I have read in a long time. Congrats to you both on a wonderfully done poem. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Two great talents...doing what they do best. Excellent! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very charming result of two romantic souls. Love to both. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful duet by two of Passions finest! Much enjoyed your blending of words. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing and BillCharles~ Just wonderful ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mysteria - heheh little ditty - thank you - means a lot coming from you TY Ericc - as always - much to much sweet TY Margherita - and love back to you - how sweet of you Nancy - you humble me with your words TY Marge - thank you so very much! Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
wow - amazing - I especially liked this part All I am able to do is sigh your memory, it lives with my every breath . . . what a beautiful & descriptive write - I felt like I was there ... I love the smell of magnolias excellent work you two [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-02-2003 06:23 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
My vote is in. There is just no beating something written by two great writers together. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your words be intertwined forevermore between the covers of Reflections... You were right on key singing this lovely duet! Love & Hugs to you both, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-02-2003 06:59 PM).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it really is pretty  |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
very sweet, you two... ~A~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely write...I do hope this makes it to the book..."click" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wow loved this, and the end leaves one breathless great work guys! [This message has been edited by Aenimal (04-02-2003 08:59 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful, Bill and Sue. A very pretty romantic book submission, too.  (me to vote) "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dreambuilder - ty so much - that was my favorite line too . . . Brad - always can count on you, my friend . . thank you Linda - what a beautiful thing to say TY kaile - Alice and vandana - thank you so very much . . . Sun - thank you - me too lol Raph - thanks sweety - breathless . . . xxoo Ethel - you snuck in there - always always good to see you reading . . . thank you truly Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-02-2003 09:17 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Congratulations you two on one terrific duet. Just lovely. Gets my vote! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a beautiful blend you two. Big smile... TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well lookit this, the verse is as gentle as magnolia perfume! What a graceful dance of word. justmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmlovely. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Night & Diamond - thank you so very much - always good to see you guys reading . . . K - you know I was looking for you to GET that scent for the magnolia . . . TY xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Yay!!! (big group hug) Oh Bill and Sue, you make such a wonderful poetic team and I love magnolias so much and the thought of a loved one putting one given to her in her hair made me smile! (smiles) Yay, this is a gorgeous duet, I love it, sometime I'd love to write with you Sue, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue & Bill Such a beautiful bouquet of words from two very talented people. Here is a little something for you, written by me. "A poet weaves his words through each verse to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire." Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - what lovely words you always have - what an honor to say you would want to write with me - thank you Sue - that was lovely - you know I love those . . . thank you xxoo |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
when two come together as one...well, you get this...and this gets my vote ;-) What romance *sigh* :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a romantically beautiful poem Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Kristie - always good to see you reading . . . xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
heheheh thank you Sun . . . Dreamer - thank you so much! xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-04-2003 02:48 PM).] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh the two of you have written such beauty ~ Bonnie |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
was wondering if you mind if I print this out for future use . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
B - thank you so much . . . dream - we would be honored TY xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you guys duet nicely on blue click  I love the way poets stick both words and souls together at this site!BTW, it's going into my private library too! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Kacy - means so much - truly . . . xxoo |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Magnolia is one of my most favorite flowers, very sweet smelling and, yes, very romantic. You two have done a great job capturing the essence of it all. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful write from two great writers. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ariana & Jason - thank you so much - your words mean so much to us xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! just marvelous! I'm green with envy! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Dixie - always always so good to see you here . . . hey what did I say bout that green face now . . . lol xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-08-2003 09:48 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - a most beautiful romantic write even if I may say so. You are an excellent poet and I appreciate the chance to write words with you. Thank you... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill you are so sweet - you - I was honored to write with you - and am learning much here - so your welcome and thank you right back! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - I know, I know, I've already replied but I just wanted to thank you for writing this with me again. I'm so glad that some of the duets made the book, as they are special, and I wonder if any other poets elsewhere have written duets. At least I haven't seen them as yet. You're a very special lady Sue, very special... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Bill . . . such a sweet spirit - honored to write with you . . . xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Oh, how pretty that was. Never be normal! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Wind - great to see you here xxoo |
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