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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-04-02 12:00 PM

I think of you

and my drawn breath
telescopes
the back of my head

and turns my eyes to pools
my body is shed
       and lies tingling
on the ground
my chin
reaches craves
for the sky

        the pools overflow
making rivers
that sow
  deafness
to everything else

I am taken
      by the flood

of you

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-04-02 12:07 PM

"and turns my eyes to pools
"my body is shed
and lies tingling
on the ground
my chin
reaches craves
for the sky"

Yes, indeed!

"I am taken
by the flood"

Good for brian....Bad for wranx.

Bout time you got back here!!!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-04-02 07:43 AM

This is so tender and sweet.
Great poem.
Eric

luvlorn322
Junior Member

since 2002-10-28

Posts 43

3 posted 2003-04-02 07:50 AM

that was beautiful and very well expressed, thanks for sharing

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-04-02 07:54 AM

I enjoyed this.
Margherita

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-04-02 10:24 AM

*I touch the screen*

gentle heart viking, I am quite taken with you

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-04-02 04:28 PM

I am taken
by the flood

of you

Hey nice to see you writing, and love these words miss our chats and the water too

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2003-04-02 04:30 PM

Where der heck you been?

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2003-04-02 04:45 PM

"taken"

Sounds like love to me. Enjoyed this very much.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-04-02 04:56 PM

What a wonderful way to be taken away from us. Glad you survived the flood.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-04-02 07:17 PM

enjoyed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-04-02 08:19 PM

Brian's home....
sigh.
Good for all of us.
Even Wranx.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2003-04-03 12:14 PM

(nobody saw that...)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-04-03 12:33 PM

Brian, this is so romantic. I know she
has to love the words, especially
"I am taken by the flood of you"
So beautiful.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

14 posted 2003-04-03 01:29 AM

wow...definitely swept away by this one. Love it :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

15 posted 2003-04-03 02:32 AM

DAMN!
I love you people

sorry
I exiled myself
for stupid reasons

but you guys make me
stretch out
and smile

I do feel home

and for that
I thank all of you

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-04-03 02:21 PM

Brian - this is lovely - absolutely beautiful:

taken by the flood of you . . .

Amazing write . . . xxoo

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