Open Poetry #25 |
Just us |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
When the sunrises you are on my mind as the hours pass its seems that some how you are what I always find reflecting back to me in some image as I drive down the highway and look to the sea it is you washing upon the shore and calling to me This surprises me not for it is when I read your words that I am lost in life and want nothing more then to hold you tight and take flight to a far away place where no others may come Just you and I in our own private sky floating on the clouds never wondering why or how Just Us you and I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - this is just beautiful: Just you and I in our own private sky floating on the clouds never wondering why or how Just Us you and I Ahhh . . . what a nice dream xxoo |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nice write, really enjoyed Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Wow, what wonderful thoughts. Thanks for sharing this work with us! Poetry is love and love is life. |
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