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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-02 11:48 PM





When the sunrises you are on my mind
as the hours pass its seems that some how you are what I always find reflecting back to me in some image as I drive down the highway and look to the sea it is you washing upon the shore and calling to me

This surprises me not for it is when I read your words that I am lost in life and want nothing more then to hold you tight and take flight to a far away place where no others may come

Just you and I in our own private sky
floating on the clouds never wondering
why or how
Just Us
you and I

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-04-03 05:14 AM


Very nice...James
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
2 posted 2003-04-03 02:32 PM


Thomas - this is just beautiful:

Just you and I in our own private sky
floating on the clouds never wondering
why or how
Just Us
you and I

Ahhh . . . what a nice dream   xxoo

bslicker
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state of mind
3 posted 2003-04-03 02:39 PM


Nice write, really enjoyed

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
4 posted 2003-04-03 02:46 PM


Wow, what wonderful thoughts. Thanks for sharing this work with us!

Poetry is love and love is life.

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