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Our Virtual Reality |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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With motives that remained unseen, Your words appeared upon the screen. You were my ultimate fantasy Brought forth in a virtual reality. Emotions I believed forever dead Were suddenly awakened in my head. And though it seemed quite absurd, I savored each and every word. While you shared your confessions, I tried to dismiss your professions. Soon I began to give over my trust, Convinced this was more than virtual lust. Then your words gained control of me As you viciously attacked my insecurity. Feeling trapped, I could not break free Of this once sweet virtual reality. And now your words no longer appear. I'm in control and without any fear. And yet there remains a part of me That still dreams of our virtual reality. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Hello, and welcome, Patricia.A very interesting post. Indeed, one I can relate to on some levels. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi Patricia ... I enjoy poems with rhyme and meter you've done well here  Welcome to Passions |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As Rex said, you did do a wonderful job... and on a subject too true, and very real... adding a depth of intensity as well... a wonderful reminder to be careful to whom you click with... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Patricia~ ~Welcome to Passions~ I've been away and playing catch up and can't find your original post so must be in a different forum. Great poem, but franky I wish someone would attack my insecurities, how else does one grow, virtual or not? Pretty name! Grins. My maiden name is Herrick and written cursively it is beautiful and that's the only time I use Patricia, on some poetry. So formal....don't you have a nick name??? Quite talented, you are, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Hugs and regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I not only enjoyed what you were conveying in your poem, but I also enjoyed reading it in the rhyming couplets! Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
sensual greetings , those virtual meetings yes been there done that ,heart to heart in virtual chat Hope |
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