Open Poetry #25 |
Paranoia Meter |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It comes as floor and backdrop tilt oddly. Not so the others would notice, but the camera does - a Batman crime scene lit in greenish glow. I wonder if only I see it, this altering air pitch, a sense of evil on the way. Tight throats and angled glances tell me they see it, too. I concede to an atmospheric sensitivity – full knowing anxiety creates visions that don’t exist or maybe do, but aren’t meant to be discussed with dead coworkers. © 2003 Core [This message has been edited by Corinne (04-01-2003 10:09 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Powerful piece Cor, muscles tightened reading this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! incredible imagery. I'm saving this one...loved the intensity. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A view from other sides. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes..."the greenish glow"...haunts both my waking and sleeping hours. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very intense write Cor. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone! Cor |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Corinne - amazing job here - know this: Tight throats and angled glances tell me they see it, too. xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) What's the use of sharing the information to co-workers or even Clark Kent anyway, all it becomes is one big debate and the comedy of it all is just the absurdity! (sad sigh) This is so well-written, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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