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kaile
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0 posted 2003-04-02 07:24 PM


You seem innocent
but civilians have killed us
I must go back home
My fingers go numb from tension
God, I love/hate my trigger

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kaile
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1 posted 2003-04-02 07:25 PM


God grant me
the serenity to accept
the things i cannot change
the courage to change
things i can,
and the wisdom
to know the difference

Dear God,
please keep these soldiers in your care

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2 posted 2003-04-02 07:31 PM



I take great comfort
in the reports that OUR
coalition is NOT using humans
as shields...

Thank you Kaile...
for looking at both sides
of the coin...

noah j
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3 posted 2003-04-02 08:55 PM


i like this....it shows an understanding of what it must really be like. great job.

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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4 posted 2003-04-02 11:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I've heard the rumor too and I can only imagine how tough it must feel to have to move on with the pressure on their backs! (sad sigh) This is very heartaching, sweet friend, I send hugs out to all the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kaile, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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