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So Far So Fast
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So Far So Fast |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
So Far So Fast Please take my hand let your magic fill my world Please open up the doorway and with me walk on through it Don't hold it against me for I was young and foolish Please take my hand start again I'm stronger now I'll prove it Dreaming, dreaming I'm dreaming of you swirling, twirling wanting you to notice it's all to short, it didn't last and I was not the first to know it Along the road I'm walking trying to remember how I let it go so far so fast what I'd do I just wanted to dream with you.. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold Sounds good to me, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such longing echoes in this piece...pretty, and sweet. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SimplyGold~ Sooooooooooooooo tender~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Electra, this is lovely, sweet friend, wistful longing fills this piece but I know your golden heart will find this sunshine, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Love it! |
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