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A Thorn To Tear
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A Thorn To Tear |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What words could spill heartbeats into cool water? These flows of magma from the soul that won’t be cooled And should I lean into the wind, denying all by right defend? Separate the happiness away and hope my heart is fooled? Does it matter equally, if another fails to see? Oceans stir inside of me a boundless paradise unsealed And should I say it less for them, keeping silent in pretend Since wounds of once before have closed for me and healed? What words could lift from far within to take the breath of spring? But those I speak in earnest ease, set free from silent percolate And should I say in the right way, more real to be expressed it may Since then no doubt to warm once out, as matters most to demonstrate Copyright Kkh 3/27/03 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen - loved this: These flows of magma from the soul that won’t be cooled nice lines here . . . xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) It will be up to you to discover this answer, as we all have a way in getting where we need to be! (sigh) Justice will be served to you, dearest friend, if a thorn can pierce the flesh it surely will come out, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
this is just damned remarkable. the first stanza really gripped me - I am rarely so moved. -majnu |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Remarkably poignant~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - another excellent write from your pen... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Does it matter equally, if another fails to see? Oceans stir inside of me a boundless paradise unsealed And should I say it less for them, keeping silent in pretend Since wounds of once before have closed for me and healed? You dear lady are a warm smile, a cool breeze, a single tear drop...a pure and endless emotion, the essence of poetry. This Diamond~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome...just remarkable! I wonder how you do it sometimes! |
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