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Open Poetry #25

I'm Talking

edh
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 111

0 posted 2003-03-31 01:45 PM

I'm talking to you.

Singing.

Now.

Then.

Summer.  Time.

I have talked.

Sang.

To.

You.

Then.

Soon.

So different.

I sang.  Talked to trees.

Streets.

Sewers.

Weeds.

In cracks.

I would say they are listening.

To me.

I've thought of specs in eyes.

Eyelids open.

No one pushes.

Forces.

They go up and down.

We see.

I fall when I see.
I don't stop falling.

Myself.

I'm an eyelid.

It is Summer.  Now.

Then.

Soon.

Please.

Open your eyelids -

As sewers -

Streets -

Weeds -

Sing.  Talk to me.

Please me.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-04-01 10:13 PM

I've never held a conversation with the sewer,
(wouldn't want to get that close you know)
but I've sang out loud and made sure I was heard.

Not that anyone was listening that close~

Interesting poem~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-04-02 04:28 AM

neat

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