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Beaming ..........(Rictameter attempt)
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Beaming ..........(Rictameter attempt) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 ~ Beaming When he was proud Showing off his daughters Introducing his loving wife Helping his grandchildren take their first steps Performing magic flawlessly I remember our Dad Face lit with pride Beaming ~ . . . Chris Barker Apr.1/03 ~~~~~ [This message has been edited by Nightshade (04-01-2003 05:57 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful! I would like to think my girls will look back at me like this. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (04-01-2003 04:17 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at you! BEAMING!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..he was..all this and more! Beautiful Chris! Look at you glow little sister! This is wonderful..your best yet! *...now excuse me while I find a kleenex for the mascara running down my cheeks* ~Much pride, love and hugs, Nancy Lee~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Forgot to click the library button..  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Jason, Karilea, & Nancylee, thankyou for your sweet comments. Yes, Nancylee, finding the pic made me tear up too. Karilea...thankyou for the kick in the pants. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 You're welcome! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 BEAUTIFUL!! And you know that I love it, too!!  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Ethel, actually it was reading your Rictameters that got me thinking...hmmm..maybe I could try one of those. hugs  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this brought tears to my eyes because of the love you and your sister share for your dad, sweet friend, he must have a golden heart just like you and Nancy do that he passed onto both of you, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is a gleaming piece of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful rictameter, Chris...you did better than attempt it..you mastered it...and the photo of you and Nancy and your parents is wonderful...thank you for sharing a memory in words and a picture with us.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
very nice - I needed some positive - ty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~NightShade Tenderest thoughts Held close within the heart Shared now with others in friendship Such a memoried moment you have shared Precious words brimming with much love Pride sheds soft afterglow Daughterly heart NightShade~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, scorpio, dreambuilder, thankyou for reading and your kind comments. Marge - what a lovely reply - thankyou and hugs to you dear poetess. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - great to have memories like this... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris...A wonderful memory shared with these words and photo...priceless to you and your family..thank you for sharing.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill & Martie - thankyou to both of you dear ones. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'd be sure to edit this and change one word...."attempt".... This a nice little poem, and very appropriate to the form -- well done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
hanky alert! beautiful! Rf |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ratleader & Robert - thankyou so much for reading and commenting. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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