Open Poetry #25 |
Seven Pair Of Men........Fourteen |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
* * ~*~ Seven Then, fourteen men Fathers and sons deployed National Guard from Kentucky All, brave men willing to serve their Country From same military unit Seven pair of Soldiers All go to war Seven ~*~ * * * [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-01-2003 05:40 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some day I will try one of these. My husband stopped by last night to tell me that someone from his division (333rd Marines)during the VietNam war contacted him out of the blue... Memories good and bad are being raised. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is a strong undertone of sadness, even though it suggests courage and valour. Well done, dear Ethel. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this seems a lot like the Vietnam War to me for some reason. I'm worried about how many lives are going to be lost. But, all we can do is pray. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mrgherita, you read me very well. Yes I was thinking about the families of thes men if both Father and Son lost their lives. I appreciate you reading the sadness in this. I am really hurt when there is war. I hate destruction and love peace. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ethel I really like these, must try one some day, you do them so well |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, why don't you try writing some of them? They're really fun to do.I like to try, anyway. "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ethel - goodness they keep getting better - before you know it - I will be ckicking on to one line of WHAM! This is disheartening - how do you do this??? xxoo |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
You do these so well A very good poem, lets hope the seven pair return safely Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sue. I'm glad that you like them. I'll bet you could do them, too. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Tara. I hope they return home safely, too. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, my prayers are with them all, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a very heartfelt poem that well expresses the thoughts of our loved soldiers! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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