replenished --- inspired by Marge's magical writing...

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Open Poetry #25

replenished --- inspired by Marge's magical writing...

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2003-04-01 02:51 PM

traversing the circles
in infinite little steps
looking for corners
that are present
in countless zillions

one step ahead in time,
with a footprint left behind
the mirror shows what is in front
yet presenting a reflection
of what has been:
like history
of the good times
and ...

yet memories,
priceless as they are
always in faint remember
of what has been
like shadows of willows
caused by the moon's silver rays
falling on the ground where
they earlier were laid down
by the sun's golden sheen

all we have to do is see
and enjoy the visions of our inner eye
and we will find ourselves
Replenished
with eternal satisfaction
an original contentment

and the untold stories will live on
in the heart of the whispering woods

and generations will then hear

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Marge's inspiring post is here : /pip/Forum64/HTML/002687.html

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-04-01 03:35 PM

I loved this...I could get lost within your words. Thanks,
Eric

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-04-01 03:41 PM

You have a wonderful way with words...I like how you express these thoughts... well done Sudhir..

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-04-01 03:49 PM

Sudhir~
And my dear friend ... I would tell you that to 'inspire' is such a compliment~

You have the easy gift-of-thought that graces these pages, no matter where your inspiration comes from~

Did ya' know ... it was just all IN you ... waiting to be poured in poetic ink ?

I thank you always for your poetry and your friendship~

Psst ... it's GORGEOUS !
Has a life-circle of it's own~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-04-01 03:50 PM

wonderfully done!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2003-04-01 05:30 PM

Hi Sudhir, this is a wonderful poem. Very inspirational in itself.
Sandra

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2003-04-02 03:57 AM

Eric, thanks for the complimentary response...

scorpio, thanks a lot... you are kind

Marge, my friend, you always say such nice things...

thanks a lot...

Brad, many thanks

Sandra, thanks a lot, my friend...

Regards to all,
Sudhir

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