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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-02-24 12:05 PM


As I sit and drink a litre
And try to write in perfect metre
My starving muse, I cannot feed her
If she won't put out
I'll have to beat her


© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-24 12:06 PM


LMAO I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-02-24 12:10 PM


keep your pimp hand strong lol
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-02-24 12:31 PM


lol
I seem to have the desire to do that often too!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 78
TX, USA
4 posted 2003-02-24 03:23 AM


Oh Jason--

Very funny... tho I lean more towards choking my muse ala Homer / Bart Simpson.

Thanks for the read,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-02-24 03:41 AM


great! love it!
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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6 posted 2003-04-01 10:07 PM


Hahahah....ok Jason,
if my way doesn't work...I'll try yours!
Eric

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
7 posted 2003-04-01 10:40 PM


Yea, my muse isn't being very nice either,
but I don't want to beat him up too bad.

There's always a possibility that
he'll surprise me when I least expect it!

Fun poem and well said!  
go easy on her!!  

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
8 posted 2003-04-02 02:56 AM


Jason - your way sounds better than mine which is repeatedly scribbling nonsense into a journal until none of it makes any sense - I actually still have one white page saying just this at the top:

I ponder . . .

this was great . . . xxoo


passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-04-02 03:52 AM


hehehe....this one tickled me
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