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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-31 05:18 AM


The Beauty of Those Moments

How I cried when you left me
but you know that.
It was more than a sad cry.
It was laced with some happiness.
Thank God for that.
Oh yes, I wanted you more than anyone
in this world and I found myself in the
middle of my sadness as I awoke to
another morning sans your smile.
And for the Love of God I hate to miss
all the sweetness of your kiss.
I feel as if this is way to soon for all the
beautiful times we shared to become only
memories in two hearts that cared.
Still, I honesty do love you and I respect
every desire you have to be free.
Everyone needs to follow their road to happiness
and love has opened my eyes to the realization
that your happiness isn't dependent on me.
Honey, I was worried that my actions hurt you or
scared you away but now I realize it wasn't me after all.
It was your heart trying to find the way.
I treasure the precious experiences we shared as one.
Nothing will erase the beauty of those moments
from my heart nor no one.

JamesLee
March31
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (03-31-2003 05:22 AM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-31 06:14 AM


James - I do believe this is my favorite - even though it is sad - shows much insight from you . . . here:

It was your heart trying to find the way.

xxoo

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2003-03-31 06:17 AM


"treasure the precious experiences "

yes, we should never forget to do that...

very well written...

Regards to you, James,
Sudhir

KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-03-31 09:41 AM


how honest...how sad....

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

morefiah
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4 posted 2003-03-31 09:45 AM


James, somehow I always get the feeling that I am looking deep into your soul when I read your work. And I am always moved by it. You do know that your ability to touch the heart of others is a blessing don't you? Great stuff.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-03-31 03:30 PM


Thank you littlewing, Sudhir, Kristie and morefiah for the beautiful responses...James
its a secret
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6 posted 2003-03-31 09:43 PM


I really like this

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Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-31 11:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, nothing can ever change those moments, nothing, and love will always find a way time and time again as you are deserving of this comfort! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Justbleu
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8 posted 2003-03-31 11:14 PM


Unconditional love....Wonderful write!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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