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Pity
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Save all your pity For Littlewings fieldmouse Who bleeds before God |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aw!  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Dang I screwed the syllable count, who bought me that last drink? Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'll buy you another one to forget and leave the poem as it is..perfect |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason - my poor little mouse - OMG - we HAVE all gone crazy - but this - IS perfect = awesome job - OMG - I love this!!!!! And Raph - if you are buyin drinks - shove one over here please . . . xxoo Jason - this is really good - thank you xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-31-2003 06:38 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Yw, I was actually trying to simply write about pity, and your poor little mouse kept jumping into my head.I was going to change it to get the count right, but Raphael, who knows my weakness, bought me out for a drink. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know - I did a sonnet - heheh - it sounded really good but was all wrong in rule - but when I tried to change it - it lost all the meaning - so I left it - too many rules in writing anyhow . . . xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Sue, please check your email to clear things up. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehe I did TY Jason - xxoo |
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