navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » A Trembling Leaf
Open Poetry #25
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Trembling Leaf Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Ivy Rose
Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-04-01 12:00 PM


Like a leaf
trembling in the wind;
so my heart trembles
at the very thought
of you moving away from me,
at the very suggestion
that we might be
separated from each other.

I am a leaf attached:
attached to the branch
of our love, attached to
the flow of Love's blanched
photosynthesis.
The wind gently rocking
with the sway of its breath
causing my heart to flutter.

Each golden drop
of the Sun's fragmented rays
filtering through the green
of my leafy treasure.
I listen for your song to bring
my spirit pleasure. Yet, I stay
attached to your strong limb,
even as I tremble in the wind.

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (04-01-2003 12:10 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-04-01 12:37 PM


Ivy Rose - you have written this from a very soft heart, and I've read it in this writing. Best to you...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-04-01 04:43 AM


just beautiful!
Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia
3 posted 2003-04-01 12:44 PM


yes this is very beautiful
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2003-04-01 06:16 PM


IvyRose~
I was tenderly transported on this poetic breeze~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

dreambuilder
Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
5 posted 2003-04-01 09:36 PM


oh how I felt this one - could relate - beautiful write - wow
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » A Trembling Leaf

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary