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A Trembling Leaf
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A Trembling Leaf |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Like a leaf trembling in the wind; so my heart trembles at the very thought of you moving away from me, at the very suggestion that we might be separated from each other. I am a leaf attached: attached to the branch of our love, attached to the flow of Love's blanched photosynthesis. The wind gently rocking with the sway of its breath causing my heart to flutter. Each golden drop of the Sun's fragmented rays filtering through the green of my leafy treasure. I listen for your song to bring my spirit pleasure. Yet, I stay attached to your strong limb, even as I tremble in the wind. [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (04-01-2003 12:10 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - you have written this from a very soft heart, and I've read it in this writing. Best to you... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes this is very beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ I was tenderly transported on this poetic breeze~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
oh how I felt this one - could relate - beautiful write - wow |
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