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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-03-30 05:16 PM


Furious Fingers

Copyright 2003 by:  MARK V SHELDON


Chicklets click
beneath furious fingers

like exploding kernels
resisting
the intense pressure

of inside insight
gathered by
google-eyed disbelief

as one link
chains to another

browsing finds
time missing
while searching

for the Truth...


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Ringo
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1 posted 2003-03-30 05:57 PM


Chicklets click
beneath furious fingers
like exploding kernels
resisting
the intense pressure
of inside insight
gathered by
google-eyed disbelief
**********************************

Great write. I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-30 06:00 PM


You just captured the truth!
Cute!
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2003-03-30 07:49 PM


furious fingers=my daughter's keyboarding

as for the truth, it's harder to find these days
or perhaps it never was available publicly?

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4 posted 2003-03-30 09:46 PM


Mark - as you know the true can be there or not. Described well in this poem...

BC

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5 posted 2003-03-30 09:57 PM


Much enjoyed the read Mark!
Well done as usual.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-03-30 10:20 PM


Excellent pounding of the chicklets Mark..
MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2003-03-31 01:13 AM


Ringo, I'm glad it was thorough.  Thank you.

Margherita...  I just hinted at it, really, but thank you for the read.

Kacy, the young generation must be quick typists, what with all the text messaging and IM'ing.  As for the Truth...  it's definitely made public, but whom does one believe with all the half-truths out there...?

Bill...  it's always there but sometimes we can't see it because it's right in front of us...

Thank you, Nancy.

Raph, sometimes the chicklets lose their flavor quickly and need to be pounded...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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8 posted 2003-03-31 07:40 AM


like exploding kernels
resisting
the intense pressure
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mark, I am enjoying your writing very much!  You bring the picture to eye...
Great job :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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9 posted 2003-03-31 09:07 PM




(sigh) I think many fail to realize how apparent the truth truly can be and think it is too obvious when the truth should be exclusive! (big hugggsssssss) This is well-said, sweet friend, your wit always astounds me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-04-01 03:37 PM


KristieSue:  Thank you kindly.  

Noah:  Truth is.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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11 posted 2003-04-05 12:47 PM


Ahhh! My favorite subject....Done well

Kudos Mark.

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12 posted 2003-04-05 02:36 AM


always enjoy you
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13 posted 2003-04-05 11:17 PM


this was a fun read  LOL  made me smile...
searching for truth.... and time
great subjects

~~ Connie ~~

MARK V SHELDON
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14 posted 2003-04-06 04:42 PM


Ed, I thank you kindly.

passing shadows:  

Connie, I'm honored that I brought a smile to your countenance.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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