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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 04:45 PM



Never That Far

every moment
holds thoughts
of you
there I
keep you
closely to
my heart
so you
are never
that far


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
SilentFreija
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 37

1 posted 2003-03-30 04:48 PM


I liked it. It was a cute short poem! Personally I like longer poems but I do like short poems just as much. Great job!
regards2you
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2 posted 2003-03-30 10:34 PM




Helen,

I like this a lot, because it could be so true.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-30 10:37 PM


Helen..I enjoyed this one very much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-03-30 10:40 PM


Helen, that is so true -- hold that special someone near your heart and....

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S Arthur Grey
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5 posted 2003-03-30 11:14 PM


h
indeed, and a comfort to be held, even if only in the abstract . . .
S

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (03-30-2003 11:35 PM).]

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