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Open Poetry #25

Never That Far

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 04:45 PM

Never That Far

every moment
holds thoughts
of you
there I
keep you
closely to
my heart
so you
are never
that far

SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

1 posted 2003-03-30 04:48 PM

I liked it. It was a cute short poem! Personally I like longer poems but I do like short poems just as much. Great job!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-03-30 10:34 PM

Helen,

I like this a lot, because it could be so true.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-30 10:37 PM

Helen..I enjoyed this one very much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-03-30 10:40 PM

Helen, that is so true -- hold that special someone near your heart and....

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S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2003-03-30 11:14 PM

h
indeed, and a comfort to be held, even if only in the abstract . . .
S

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (03-30-2003 11:35 PM).]

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