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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-03-30 04:31 PM


Morning stars and dreams
suspended
stranded on edge of night
distant clouds gather winter's last stand
and out this window i see nothing
but the distance between us
imprisoned longings
cling
to the passing thought
that these winds
bear your very breath

Rf


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-03-30 04:53 PM


breathe deeply
feel the soft winds
perhaps she is within
the very gentlest movement of air

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-03-30 05:13 PM


The distance between us does indeed make for good poetry.  I so loved this view and the way you breathe her.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-30 05:15 PM


The gently penned...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-03-30 06:08 PM


Robert -  Very nice indeed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2003-03-30 09:48 PM


Robert - I read a lot of meaning in this write, nice...

BC

regards2you
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6 posted 2003-03-30 10:25 PM




"these winds bear your very breath"

Yes!  Great poem!


Enjoyed, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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