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Shadows Whisper
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SHADOWS WHISPER” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Darkness overcomes the night with quiet, my eyes close, your skin becomes warmer… Dreams become real of your gentle touch, your response is of a loving abductor… Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard, a warm breeze begins to flow upon my face… Your breath of passionate desires to know, lips slowly part, eyes sparkle with your grace… Love near the patio, as soft moonlight beckons, whispers of trees swaying, lips taste each other… Mesmerized with you, entering into your world, tender is the night inside shadows whisper... ~~~~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You say it well, my friend. Men's feelings are so often pushed behind other things....good to see them out in the open with a talented pen to lead them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, "tender is the night" enjoyed. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
You words are always filled with romance and tenderness Bill  Full of sighs and smiles here!Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Bill: what a fresh and welcome feeling in today's day and age and state of "affairs"... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the patio...ah...what a memory! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill this is just lovely - as always Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard, a warm breeze begins to flow upon my face… brings me there it does . . . xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I long to kiss my dream love like that as I can only imagine how beautiful a feeling it is to share the night with a loved one! (big hugggsssssss) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...What can I say that hasn't been said about your wonderful poetry. Except...your poetry has the power to mesmorize and enchant those who grasp just a hint of the romance in your beautiful poem. WONDERFUL POEM!!!! ***Ivy Rose [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (03-30-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
Great poem! I liked the title of it. Very creative and beautiful. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, I never tire of reading your wonderfully romantic pieces. This line Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard is so soothing and loving. Huggles for peace. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah this is so lovely and stirring. You create beautiful atmospheres! Love, Margherita |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This was very descriptive, and a most excellent post. Great job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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