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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-03-29 04:04 AM



A whisper to me
permeating
this dense fog

faint shadow upon the wall . . .

"Ssshhhhh . . .
my sweet child
No fear
not here
Take my hand
I guide you
through the deepest pits of hell
to the morning glory light"

tonight

I held her hand
and cried
awakening
with own hands clasped
on this journey

to me

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-03-29 11:01 AM


Enjoyed...James
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-03-29 11:03 AM


littlewing
Well done, enjoyed.

ctowen
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3 posted 2003-03-29 11:08 AM


True to self ....
   like little wings upon Life's weathered masses.

      ... like this feel of you.

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-29 11:24 AM


James - thank you
SY - always good to see you reading me
C - thank you - you are much too kind

Thank you guys xxoo

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-03-29 11:58 AM


remarkably..I have no words
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-03-29 01:09 PM


Awesome. The content and the style.
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-03-29 02:52 PM


Wow...
Has anyone ever told you, what a wonderful talent you have my dear?  Quite a journey!
ThisDiamond

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-03-29 03:13 PM


Raph - TG - no words for once . . . hehe

Margherita = TY so very much

Diamond - thank you - my goodness - I am humbled  

xxoo

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-03-30 04:18 AM


wow! love this!
Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-03-30 04:46 AM


Sue I have choice words for you but can't post them hear lol
littlewing
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11 posted 2003-03-30 06:50 AM


Dixie - thank you so much!

Raph - zip that lip . . . I know this would be a miracle from the Man himself but . . .
hehehehe  

Thanks guys xxoo

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12 posted 2003-03-30 05:46 PM


This is getting really dangerous... The more of your writing I read, the more I think of giving my pen away.
Another great write, Sue.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

wranx
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13 posted 2003-03-30 05:59 PM


Yes, Sue.
Walk yourself through the dark travails and into the warmth.
You are your own best companion on this journey.

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-03-30 06:05 PM


Brad - you set down that pen and you are in trouble . . .  but thank you - I am humbled

Ed - I am trying - I am trying . . .  thank you guys xxoo

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