Open Poetry #25 |
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Spirit |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York ![]() |
A whisper to me permeating this dense fog faint shadow upon the wall . . . "Ssshhhhh . . . my sweet child No fear not here Take my hand I guide you through the deepest pits of hell to the morning glory light" tonight I held her hand and cried awakening with own hands clasped on this journey to me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing Well done, enjoyed. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
True to self .... like little wings upon Life's weathered masses. ... like this feel of you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - thank you SY - always good to see you reading me C - thank you - you are much too kind Thank you guys xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
remarkably..I have no words |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome. The content and the style. Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow... Has anyone ever told you, what a wonderful talent you have my dear? Quite a journey! ThisDiamond |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - TG - no words for once . . . hehe Margherita = TY so very much Diamond - thank you - my goodness - I am humbled xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! love this! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue I have choice words for you but can't post them hear lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie - thank you so much! Raph - zip that lip . . . I know this would be a miracle from the Man himself but . . . hehehehe Thanks guys xxoo |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is getting really dangerous... The more of your writing I read, the more I think of giving my pen away. Another great write, Sue. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, Sue. Walk yourself through the dark travails and into the warmth. You are your own best companion on this journey. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - you set down that pen and you are in trouble . . . but thank you - I am humbled Ed - I am trying - I am trying . . . thank you guys xxoo |
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