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Stretching Shadows
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{From the Notebook} ~*~*~*~ Here in dark-- mid winter' the ocean meets horizons another instance of embrace stars falling single color {water and sky} I need to touch that point of reflection drenched sweet how sometimes the taste of you reminds my lips of flavors {love} I walk often on the edge of myself between earth and heaven in silent path -- clouds behind me dancing s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e shadows slide from the sky remembering as he whispered you are my salvation in quiet voice ~~~~~~~~~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light You come to me out of my dreams Across the night [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-30-2003 11:34 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - "how sometimes the taste of you reminds my lips of flavors" {love} Once before I felt softness of lips such as these... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, very much a quiet voice poem.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So quietly, in a whispered breath, hearing the word LOVE within these shadows. beautifully done, Lauren |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....shhhh...a little secret....I take writing lessons from you.......you're a marvel....shhhhh... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Here in dark-- mid winter' the ocean meets horizons another instance of embrace stars falling single color {water and sky} I need to touch that point of reflection drenched sweet how sometimes the taste of you reminds my lips of flavors {love} I walk often on the edge of myself between earth and heaven silent path clouds behind me dancing s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e shadows slide from the sky ===================================== When I read you...I feel a peace that I rarely ever touch.....its like I breathe from a lighter place ... its one of those rare moments of calm exhale...serenity of sigh. Thank you for that me sweet butterfly sister.   "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
"how sometimes the taste of you reminds my lips of flavors {love} I walk often on the edge of myself between earth and heaven silent path clouds behind me dancing s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e shadows slide from the sky" How can you be this good every time I read you????? You are just breath taking dear poet  Tara "in my field of paper flowers and candy clouds of lullaby i lie inside myself for hours and watch my purple sky fly over me" - Imaginary by Evanes [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-30-2003 12:01 PM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I walk often on the edge of myself between earth and heaven in silent path -- clouds behind me dancing s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e shadows slide from the sky remembering as he whispered light was salvation in quiet voice ~~~~~~~~~ ****************** You always lend us a path of serene travel in your words and this one is no exception. Beautiful as the heart of the poet that penned it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Such delicacy is a lovely talisman of your work~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ Psssssssst ... I see you, MarkB~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous poetry always make me smile as they reflect such light and beauty over the waters! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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