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Peace At Last (is a bit harsh i will admit)
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Peace At Last (is a bit harsh i will admit) |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
Ok this poem i made up right here right now, its about an ex friend of mine who seesm to be nothing more then a backstabbing cow who cares nothing about other people and only about herself. If your friends with her its because SHE said you could and you have to be at least as much as a cow as she is. And well after yet another fight tonight i thought i would write this. A poem that as i said made up right here and now. You told me once to ignore you Yet you just want to start the fights How am i meant to ignore your exsistence When you go back on your plights Never have i hated someone Though now i see its true I have finally found someone Worth hating and that someone is you Fighting might bring sadness, And also loss of friends But to tell you what I will be happy without you and them If it means losing you out of my life And friends that wernt really friends at all Then fine, let it be that way Because im turning my life into something new I am sorry i feel this way But I dont regret it at all You and i had a chance at being friends Yet you backstabbed and were nothing but cruel So goodbye, fearwell, syonara Your out of my life for good I can finally sleep a lot better at night Knowing i have a lot more days without fights. [This message has been edited by Aya (03-30-2003 01:45 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Talk about venting! Does this make you feel better? Somehow, I don't think it does, but maybe just feel relieved that you expressed your anger. Careful that your own words don't come back to you someday, backstabbing you with guilt for calling someone a cow. Then again, maybe that's what her mentality level offers as her reality base. |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
Well it wasnt venting exactly, i mean it was but it was a sorta poem that i wanted to make, i mean i just dont want to be known as some person that has to make sweet poems, i wanted to see if i could do it via the "dark side" also. It was half and half, half venting/ex friendship problems and half testing myself to see if i could write anything else besides something sweet and romantic thats all. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
No,please, Aya... tell us your true feelings lol You were going for your dark side, and... girl, did you ever get there. Nice job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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