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She comes to me
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She comes to me |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
She comes to me with passionate kisses full of abandon full of desire She comes to me asking little expecting less She comes to me a friend and leaves a lover She comes to me confused and alone hopeless and desperate She comes to me for comfort and support and leaves fullfilled She comes to me a child and leaves a woman She comes to me because she wants to because she needs to She comes to me because I need her because I want her She comes to me the best and leaves the better She comes to me with insatiable desire only to be satisfied She comes to me and I am flattered and I am happy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
barrie might have something to say about the honesty and innocence of this bit. all i can say is: nice  .-majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's what it's all about |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
my, my, what an ego!!!!!!!!!!!! this WAS the better version, BTW [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-30-2003 08:04 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bklynboy~ Just an enjoyable read~ VERY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
manju, who is barrie....inquiring minds would like to know. Thanks all for the nice comments! |
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