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Woodland Magic
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Woodland Magic |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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This is but a fairy breeze drifting bout my window sill A inner longing whispering beyond the noise that surrounds Sacred calling to higher plane rising from mediocrity's dismal space Oh if only to join old Puck hence be bathed in woodland magic on this summer's eve Sadly chained by feeble mortality I stare at the taunting stars and dream of things beyond my thoughts falling to sleep to the singing of elves before reality's wind blows away fairy breeze just beyond my window sill |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this a lot. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the magical feel of the woodland, particularly the summer eve...Excellent. ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Brad - this is indeed magic... BC |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you all! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Brad, the elves and pixies and sprites may be gone when you're awake, but know they truly do exist and will always be playing peek-a-boo deep in your heart and dreams! (big hugggssssss) This is fantastic, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Brad, i really enjoyed always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Sacred calling to higher plane rising from mediocrity's dismal space" Oh these lines. They are so how I felt about my marriage. Very nice. Great piece. Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad, Well done, enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very magical write. Well done Brad. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed your magic |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I really liked this,AS already stated,a magical read. Jason |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wonderful....you and your magical breeze. Bridgette  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Brad, it's "An" inner longing...just want it to be correct for you. I enjoy your work *s M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A magical read as soft as a summer's sigh. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want one of those breezes! *S* Meanwhile... I'll let yours refresh me... this is delightful. *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Had to stop back for another cup of delight. TD |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you all |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Reading this poem was the pause I needed to refresh myself! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you for this gentle respite. Enjoyed. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I enjoyed writing it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dan - brought me away from the real world here - reminded me a bit of Rivendell - can feel the breeze - you know? Very nice xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brad, this is a good book submission...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Certainly getting my vote! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
The longing is only the beginning of the attaining. Keep the course, and the faith. |
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