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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-17 03:37 PM



This is but a fairy breeze
drifting bout
my window sill

A inner longing
whispering beyond
the noise that surrounds

Sacred calling
to higher plane
rising from mediocrity's
dismal space

Oh if only to join
old Puck
hence be bathed in woodland magic
on this summer's eve

Sadly chained by feeble mortality
I stare at the taunting stars
and dream
of things beyond my thoughts

falling to sleep
to the singing of elves
before reality's wind
blows away fairy breeze
just beyond my window sill

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-17 03:41 PM


I like this a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-02-17 03:55 PM


Enjoyed the magical feel of the woodland, particularly the summer eve...Excellent.
ThisDiamond

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-02-17 03:59 PM


Brad - this is indeed magic...

BC

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-02-17 04:09 PM


thank you all!
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(smiles) Oh Brad, the elves and pixies and sprites may be gone when you're awake, but know they truly do exist and will always be playing peek-a-boo deep in your heart and dreams! (big hugggssssss) This is fantastic, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-17 06:34 PM


Brad, i really enjoyed

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-02-18 08:08 AM


"Sacred calling
to higher plane
rising from mediocrity's
dismal space"

Oh these lines.  They are so how I felt about my marriage.  Very nice.  Great piece.

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-02-18 08:13 AM


Brad,
Well done, enjoyed.

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9 posted 2003-02-18 10:46 AM


A very magical write.  Well done Brad.
Brad Majors
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10 posted 2003-02-18 11:17 AM


thank you!
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11 posted 2003-02-18 12:30 PM


enjoyed your magic
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12 posted 2003-02-20 11:08 AM


I really liked this,AS already stated,a magical read.
Jason

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13 posted 2003-02-20 11:13 AM


Wonderful....you and your magical breeze.  

Bridgette

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14 posted 2003-03-09 07:09 PM


Brad, it's "An" inner longing...just want it to be correct for you.

I enjoy your work *s
M

Kethry
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15 posted 2003-03-09 07:23 PM


A magical read as soft as a summer's sigh.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2003-03-18 01:36 PM


I want one of those breezes! *S* Meanwhile... I'll let yours refresh me... this is delightful. *S*
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17 posted 2003-03-18 01:41 PM


Had to stop back for another cup of delight.
TD

Brad Majors
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18 posted 2003-03-18 01:43 PM


thank you all
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19 posted 2003-03-18 02:13 PM


Reading this poem was the pause I needed to refresh myself!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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20 posted 2003-03-18 05:05 PM


Thank you for this gentle respite. Enjoyed.
Brad Majors
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21 posted 2003-03-18 05:39 PM


I enjoyed writing it
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22 posted 2003-03-18 08:39 PM


Dan - brought me away from the real world here - reminded me a bit of Rivendell - can feel the breeze - you know?  Very nice xxoo
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23 posted 2003-03-18 10:26 PM


Brad, this is a good
book submission...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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24 posted 2003-03-21 02:46 PM


Certainly getting my vote!

Titia

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25 posted 2003-03-30 06:48 PM


The longing is only the beginning of the attaining.  Keep the course, and the faith.
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