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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-26 11:00 PM

you're getting closer,
enterring deep inside,

im excited,
and i'm afraid,

are u too?

blows my mind,
how you've read me,

taking me by surprise -
from out of nowhere,

still can't figure it out,
how you got to tap inside,

am i too?

in you?

dont be messing with me
afterall,
poetryman,

or

instant karma's gonna get you,

whisper to my heart,
in the midnight hours,

call out my name,

let me feel you
as i dream,

let me know,
you are truly there

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-27-2003 07:25 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-03-26 11:04 PM

inkedgoddess - like this side of you expressing your thoughts...

BC

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-03-27 07:33 AM

hmmmm ..... sounds dreamy ...
   a bit different then what I have read of you
      a little more of the real you each time ... perhaps
         very expressively given and taken.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-03-27 08:04 AM

Very expressive and beautifuly worded.
Eric

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-27 08:06 AM

Michele, we all need dreams to be real...
sometimes, anyway. Sounds like one of your
dreams may be forming into
a possible reality?
Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-27 08:53 AM

Michele - hoping your dreams become reality . . . that those long nights bear fruits of your labour . . . only the best - as always . . . xxoo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-03-27 09:17 AM

inkedgoddess .... you are that indeed. This piece gave me emotion.
Love, Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-03-27 11:07 AM

Our dreams lie on the verge of reality and our state of mind.

kind of like sitting on a fence and waiting to fall.

Good write girlielocks~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-03-27 11:29 AM

Michele,

Dreaming or fantasy, you never fail to cause me to think or feel.

Good write, enjoyed...Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-03-27 01:02 PM

This reminded me of something...James

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

10 posted 2003-03-28 07:00 PM

amazing writing - I'm in hmmmm.........

whisper to my heart,
in the midnight hours,

call out my name,

let me feel you
as i dream,

let me know,
you are truly there

I dream of the day I'm someones poetryman - what an incredible piece thank-you for sharing this beautiful imagery - very vivid & passionate - I look forward to reading more of your writing - wow

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

11 posted 2003-03-30 07:07 PM

Dreaming....thats me. I am a dreamer by definition. I dream of all the things I cant have or shouldnt have or know that I will never have. Stuff like hitting the lotto in any state, 150lbs on my frame, brown eyes. But its fun to dream, especially during the the day with bright lights around and blue skies. Dreaming at night is dark and dangerous.....painful!

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