Open Poetry #25 |
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had to have been....Heaven Sent |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
I looked into your eyes and saw them sparkle with excitment. I watched your lips turn from a small smile into a huge grin within minutes. I saw your eyes. They looked troubled, as if they were trying to find some relief. I saw your face. It looked distressed, your spirit longing for something more than what it presently had. I couldn't see your eyes. They were still covered in a veil of red from the constant flowing tears. Your face was shadowed. Your lips seemed to move slowly, quivering all at the same time. I saw your eyes. They shined with happiness. Your face, it looked so peaceful. You looked so refreshed and relieved. When your eyes sparkled with excitement- I had someone to talk to. When your eyes were red from tears- I had someone to pray for. And when your eyes shined with happiness my heart lept and I came to a conslusion..... I had definitely found a friend. My friend, a gift. My friend, a blessing. My friend, a miricle. My friend.....heaven sent. No one can convince me you aren't an angel. For you are the sun in my sky; the rainbow that goes by. You are the bright moon in my night; my hero in any plight. I thank God for sending you. You must be heaven sent. I just know this has to be true. "Remember, courage is wings." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this a lot. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Simply amazing. Simply beautiful! CD |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Beautiful. I really enjoyed this. I like the definition of a friend you portray in this. Very nice ![]() |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
Thanx all. I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. ~*~Quiet Acquiescence~*~ "Remember, courage is wings." |
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